I went to Keeneland last friday for college day, it was very crowded. The gates opened at 1 p.m. and people rushed in to find their seats and to socialize on the paddock. There were all different types of people there, college kids to adults, and for many different reasons. Some people were there for the horses, others were there for socializing. Most people were very well dressed and , women in their dresses and men in their suites and sports coats. One question is does everyone enjoy this, or not? I certainly enjoyed Keeneland, I have grown up going since I was a little girl. Keeneland is the place to be on the weekend in Kentucky this time of the year.
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This is pretty thin. Note that you were supposed to first write an Introduction (see website for instructions), and that all updates need to be 300-500 words. Yours was 122.
Your observations were also very generalized. You can't write a 5-page essay on these kinds of scant details. We need a better sense of the variety of people there, what they're wearing, what they're doing, why they're there. I hope you can go back and observe again.
You've only posted 1 blog update total. That means that you have missed 3 WJ grades.
I hope that you have done enough investigation to write a solid draft...
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